AJ: Man...I should really think up a better beginning to that chapter...it's too metaphysical...I should probably save that for later...and what's with me always starting a chapter with him rambling on about something instead of actions or talking? That's kind of annoying. Anyways, what's with people suddenly liking him? *glares at him* I think Lauren just likes my sarcastic characters and Cami may have counted her chickens before they asked. Hmmm....anyways, for once I don't feel like writing this. Weird. Eh, well...Maybe I should introduce my new character...the last chapter was almost completely pointless except for some character exposition. I'm really getting sick of calling people by their nicknames. Screw you AJ! Can't you remember a name?? Anyways...I don't know. It needs....a certain...je ne sais quoi....that...I can't find. Somethings wrong. I must fix it! Quick throw in Drew for comedic relief! (Ah Drew...I do like him a lot...) ^^
Tori: Well, I'm depressed from this story. It's my own fault, but still. Tori apparently needs a personality because she's really not the main plot point at the moment which is annoying. The romance thing has basically fallen out the window and hit the wipers on the way out. My entire plot is circling around Terry and I feel horrible for being so mean to him. It's not my fault he has personality! Virgil also needs to do something because he apparently doesn't have a personality either! I think I may have shown some of Sam's personality in that fight because he act different around Terry than around others for various reasons but still...David's randomly there, Ms. Mehall and Jim just add the element of normalcy because they're adults and have no real purpose in this one. It's WAY too serious and needs something done to it immediately to relieve the tension! That and Terry's Dad hasn't really spoken at all...I'll need to do that...huh...umm....oh, screw this. I know I'm going to have to throw the twins back into the mess for some comedy relief eventually. Might as well...OH FINE! Ergh....Why must I continue to resort to this?????
NaNoNovel: *sigh* I've completely forgotten how to write in Cinni's POV which is good and bad. That twist I added is really beginning to annoy me. I feel kind of bad about it and stuff but...eh....I think it's interesting and slightly unexpected. I really should have remembered that bracelet sooner. Maybe it will be of use...and maybe not...we'll see. Maybe that's why I feel the need to switch to Salem's POV so often. I can still write him. Cinni...however, I cannot. It probably sounds weird now. This is why I should not have taken such a large break, dangit...I dunno if it's even worth finishing, for gosh sakes! It probably isn't. The ending I imagined will be a little weird. Cami! You're villain is messing with my story! Ergh. MEHEHEH! I think something's happening finally, and it's not just Cinni explaining what's happening but it's moving...very.....very.....slowly....*sigh*
Gah, neither do I.
ReplyDeleteI also love that picture. ^^ It fits him so well.